worth I'm as you there
Taught me love,taught me to cry
Taught me love,taught me to cry
Made me wanted, made my spirit kindled
amorous and amok you are to me.
Ruff rigid raw a stone
Dexterous sculptor you are
With the sole tool of Love
Carved me to a fine sculpture
My mind a sombre sky
Diffuse light Fullmoon you are
glamourize with glittering stars
Made me to see alluring
Walk with me Made love with me
'll leave me alone in a vast world
Lost like a child in a crowd
Crowded and crowded,still alone amid
Lost like a child in a crowd
Crowded and crowded,still alone amid
Find some comfort in the great masters' pen
"It is better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all"
Should neither blame nor hate
It is a heavenly bliss,only I've felt.
Sree....For a student this is enough. But you have to be very imaginative when writing poems without any errors. More attention is needed to write correctly. You are very promising. Keep this spirit always- even after your studies.
ReplyDeleteall the best.. Bless you.. I like your writing and have added to my favourite list long back.. cheers
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